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    Mornings Make Me Wierd

    She needed defining,
    She needed soul searching,
    Covered up so good it was too late for realizing.

    All she felt was hurting,
    All she felt was dejection,
    Strange thoughts filled her head depression became certain.

    She found some retention,
    She found some conceptions,
    Thought keeping quiet really meant protection.

    She made out corrections,
    She made out a new life,
    Giving up was completely out of the question.

    and the cow jumped over the moon, yes I'm post whoring.

    rhyming scheme was ruined in the last two stanzas
    I'm just a drifter...the walking around one.

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    Zombies DeathStone is on a distinguished road
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    hahha, i love the poem dude. you're not a post whoring compare to me.

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    I likey like your poem. It's nice but I don't understand the title to the poem, does it relate?

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    haha, good poem dude, sounded great.
    OORRAHH!! KILL!!

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    nice poem buddiey...
    Chris' peom also great too! i like them
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    hehe i like the poem a lot. i actually at one point felt a connection with the poem.

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