DoDonts

She needed defining,
She needed soul searching,
Covered up so good it was too late for realizing.

All she felt was hurting,
All she felt was dejection,
Strange thoughts filled her head depression became certain.

She found some retention,
She found some conceptions,
Thought keeping quiet really meant protection.

She made out corrections,
She made out a new life,
Giving up was completely out of the question.

and the cow jumped over the moon, yes I'm post whoring.

rhyming scheme was ruined in the last two stanzas

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DeathStone

hahha, i love the poem dude. you're not a post whoring compare to me.

kamie

I likey like your poem. It's nice but I don't understand the title to the poem, does it relate?

sophath2006

haha, good poem dude, sounded great.

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AlexKim

nice poem buddiey...
Chris' peom also great too! i like them

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BoRiBoRa

hehe i like the poem a lot. i actually at one point felt a connection with the poem.

saLLy

THANKS FOR SHARING!!!