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    Flowers are fading away

    Oh the sun in the sky
    You shine so far away
    You shine so very far away
    Like my love that is so far from me now

    Please take these messages to him
    Please take all these messages to him
    That I think of him and miss him endlessly

    Why doesn't the sun pity these feelings of mine?
    And understand the worries and misery that I have?
    Leaving me all lonesome without anyone to depend on
    I think of him at all times not able to forget

    Oh the waters in the sea
    You flow so far away
    You flow so very far away
    Making me lonely awaiting for your return

    Please allow my words to get across
    Please allow my words to past and get across
    That I miss him continuously unable to forget

    Oh the shining sun you are so bright
    But my mind is still full of worries and pain indeed
    All the words and promises were not replied
    Were the last words I got from you
    Last edited by Yoyo_Flower; 03-12-2009 at 06:19 AM.


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    Wedding Chimes Destroy My Feelings

    Oh my tragic and anguished self
    So lonesome
    So miserable
    So memorable
    The warm hands that used to comfort me at all times

    But you shouldn't have broke your promises so easily
    Saying you'd never leave or change regardless
    And you'd never turn your back no matter what

    But sadly now the sound of wedding chimes from afar
    Intend to destroy my hope and dreams I have left
    And leaving me speechless not able to utter a word

    All hope I have left are my tears accompanying me
    Will never see broad daylight once again ever

    A man with a vicious and wicked heart
    With no mercy or feelings of pity at all

    Completely forgot all the words he had promised and said
    Completely forgotten all the times of comfort and warmth
    Completely forgotten everything that had happened

    When the memories come to life I stutter in deep silence
    Oh fate
    Oh destiny
    Oh karma

    I trusted him with everything I have without a single doubt all along
    I suffer in silence quietly and painfully by myself and never say a word
    I pity myself such in deep misery and pain no one would ever understand

    I'm gone in silence
    Because of you
    Making me choke on my own blood
    Because of the words you say


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    Quote Originally Posted by Yoyo_Flower View Post

    That is very sweet of you bong sreycreeam. You should write one bong, sometimes things cannot explained in sentences or paragraphs that's why I write poems instead, it's the only way I can summarize my feelings without writing a story or a novel (trust me, I get extra carried away with my writing, even I get tired of my own endless writing).

    I'd love it read it any day bong if you write it, it doesn't have to ryhme, doesn't have to be a super duper lovely ballad or anything, it's the emotions and the meaning behind it and whether we ourselves understand it. Even if it doesn't make sense, but remember we all understand things differently and learn differently. It might to some, it might not to some others.

    I do hope the one you trying to express the feelings for understand you bong. I know as a girl you probably understand where I'm coming from with the poems and possibly what I'm feeling also. I guess this is what they call "Snaeha Lokei". Only those who been through it will understand how happy it makes us all, and at the same time how hurtful and painful it also makes us feel.

    P.S What part of Ontario are you from bong sreycreeam? I'm in Hamilton.
    I do understand and know how u feel where your comin from. Guyz don't understand girls like girls do. I will try to write one, but I will only pm it to u to read. "Snaeha Lokei" thats a good one. My love life is so complicated n screwed up that I probably lost the love of my life.

    Do you know who I'm in love wit? He ain't real either lol. Twilight. Does that ring a bell? Edward Cullen has to be the best guy eva. Its to bad he ain't real, or that guys out there in this world can b like him. hahaha....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Yoyo_Flower View Post
    Flowers are fading away

    Oh the sun in the sky
    You shine so far away
    You shine so very far away
    Like my love that is so far from me now

    Please take these messages to him
    Please take all these messages to him
    That I think of him and miss him endlessly

    Why doesn't the sun pity these feelings of mine?
    And understand the worries and misery that I have?
    Leaving me all lonesome without anyone to depend on
    I think of him at all times not able to forget

    Oh the waters in the sea
    You flow so far away
    You flow so very far away
    Making me lonely awaiting for your return

    Please allow my words to get across
    Please allow my words to past and get across
    That I miss him continuously unable to forget

    Oh the shining sun you are so bright
    But my mind is still full of worries and pain indeed
    All the words and promises were not replied
    Were the last words I got from you
    omg! paoun srey after readin this poem here I started to got teary n jus want cry. I wish I could send this poem to him n mayb he will understand. If u don't mind I'm gonna start copy n paste ur poem n make a collection of yoyo flower. mayb it will get publish someday

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    "Am I really that bad?
    I can't compare to other people in your heart
    I truly loved you, with all my heart and soul
    I truly loved you, more so than my very own life
    But I didn't realize you really hate me that much
    No matter what obstacles stand in the way
    But I go through all the pain and misery just for you
    If only you could understand"

    oh man i jus luv ur poems. this one truly the one that express how i feel right now towards some1. this also made me cry, i'm so emotional.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sreycreeam View Post
    omg! paoun srey after readin this poem here I started to got teary n jus want cry. I wish I could send this poem to him n mayb he will understand. If u don't mind I'm gonna start copy n paste ur poem n make a collection of yoyo flower. mayb it will get publish someday

    My pleasure bong, feel free to do as you wish bong I honestly don't mind. I'm glad you actually enjoy them bong, I thought everyone would have a hard time understanding it actually. I sometimes don't even know what I write, honestly.


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    Batter then me bong srey
    wow yoyo n bong counttin u have very nice Avatar away more better then me

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    There is no such thing as heaven for me
    For me there is no such thing as heaven
    There is only burning fire but never any water to put it out
    There is only an image that lacks love, comfort and warmth
    There is life, but no happiness found
    There are feelings, feelings that don't matter to anyone
    There is a body, a body that only experiences hardships
    There is a song but no proper tune or melody to accompany
    In this lifetime there is just not enough happiness at all
    Everytime eyes open up all that could be seen is misery
    Painful and terrifying
    Tears nearly cover a whole lifetime
    Pain that cannot be measured
    Unmeasurable like the whole continent put together
    The feelings I kept saved, hoping for a new life every night and day
    Just vanish away with the wind, like smoke that escapes away from fire
    I'm a person like everyone else in the world
    But none other wonder or be miserable like me
    But unlike me who has to ponder and think
    Even if I thought till my death approaches
    No one would just understand at all


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