Thread: Yoyo's Senseless Poems and Poetry

IF

If your not faithful to me and not true to love
If your feelings change constantly from my love all the time
My love just go and have a happy wonderful life as you desire
Leave me feeling in misery and worries every passing day
Oh my lonesome self, so these burdens will lessen

If your not faithful and desire someone else all the time
If your feelings are cruel and destroy my wishes and hope
My love just blame it all on me as you wish, don't point fingers
Not able to provide you what you truly really wanted from me
Oh my love, please go on.

The feelings that I already loved can't be taken back no matter what
The feelings that are burdensome become extremely repressive now
The feelings of love during our times of comfort and warmth together
The feelings al where have they all gone now?

Are these the sentiments of feelings that men possess?
They got what they want and turn their backs because?
The words, the promises and vows where are they all now?
Oh the love of my life is this the heart of a man, who claims to be faithful?

Originally Posted by sreycreeam

Well yoyo flower i can tell u that, I'd b one of the ppl who readin n enjoy ur piece of work, cuz i luv to read poems. I jus wish i could write them.
The pain of love, how it's so hard n it hurts so much. Mayb I should jus try to express how I feel in a poem too. And mayb give it to that some1 who i been wantin to understand where I'm comin from.

That is very sweet of you bong sreycreeam. You should write one bong, sometimes things cannot explained in sentences or paragraphs that's why I write poems instead, it's the only way I can summarize my feelings without writing a story or a novel (trust me, I get extra carried away with my writing, even I get tired of my own endless writing).

I'd love it read it any day bong if you write it, it doesn't have to ryhme, doesn't have to be a super duper lovely ballad or anything, it's the emotions and the meaning behind it and whether we ourselves understand it. Even if it doesn't make sense, but remember we all understand things differently and learn differently. It might to some, it might not to some others.

I do hope the one you trying to express the feelings for understand you bong. I know as a girl you probably understand where I'm coming from with the poems and possibly what I'm feeling also. I guess this is what they call "Snaeha Lokei". Only those who been through it will understand how happy it makes us all, and at the same time how hurtful and painful it also makes us feel.

P.S What part of Ontario are you from bong sreycreeam? I'm in Hamilton.

Originally Posted by Pokemon

Me to bong srey I wish I can write poem bit of you yoyo.
If I know romantic poem maybe some girl will checking me

Seyha there nothing wrong with trying. No one is going to laugh bong. Everyone is good at different things. You should give it a try Seyha, you certainly have my support. And maybe you are right, you can find someone with those poems. If you do then yay, but if you don't so what at least you attempted right.

It's ok to go bad as long as it's still going good

The celestial crescent rises high up in the sky
The celestial crescent rises very high up in the sky
I observe the night, and listen to the darkness howling at me

The orb of the night changes directions many times
The orb of the night changed forms and directions many times
I hear the little ones, crying out in the wildernes piercingly
I hear the little ones, crying out in the wildernes very piercingly
My love I am dazzled and saddened thinking of you.

Once a while we'd get to see
Once a while we'd get to reunite and see
I am lonely and worrysome indeed

I glance over and see another pair of lovers
I glance over and see another loving pair of lovers
My worries grow stronger that death nearly stuns me
My worries grow stronger that death nearly stuns and immolate me
My feelings are troublesome and I feel much desolate indeed

I want to be close and comfort with you
I want to be close and comfort always with you
Able to love and share warmth with you once again

But I am a woman not possible
But I am a woman not at all possible
Not able to commit such acts as desired
Not able to commit such acts as wished and desired
If all gone wrong, then there is no more meaning for a whole lifetime

If I blossom before I spring
If I blossom before I even spring
Others will say, a girl who cannot distinguish between right and wrong

Pity my mother and father
Pity my mother and my father
How dreadful and humiliated will they be?
How dreadful and terribly humiliated will they be?
A longlasting shame and disgrace to all in the world

It's ok to go bad as long as it's still good
It's ok to go bad as long as it's still going good
If to go poor, poor is ok as long as it's still going rich

The words left by our ancestors many generations
The words left by our ancestors from many generations
The older times and folks who remind us to obey
The older times and folks who remind us to remember and obey
For us all the newer generations to follow and respect

Listening to the Raindrops

Rolling thunder and continuous rain frighten me
There's nothing to keep me comfort one bit at all
Before there used to be you here by my side
The two of us listening to the rythm of the raindrops together

But at this time we are miles away from each other
My love do you miss me or think of me at all?
Or are you listening to the rain with someone else?
Do you know I am cold and frightened and lonely?

Come back and return to me soon my love
Come back to me so we can listen to the raindrops together once again
Come back and let me lay on your lap just like before how we used to
Come back honey please pity and feel sorry for these feelings of mine

I will be open and honest with you about the way I feel
If this lifetime means being without you
In my heart will be endless misery forever
Because of you I am not able to forget

I wait, waiting for you
Every minute and second passing by
I hope to have, have you
And your heart and soul by me once again
I hope to be, be like before
Still loving and faithful and true to one another by no means would give one another a hard time one bit or ever desire to leave
My love, these are my words I have for you that come straight from the heart of a lonely girl waiting in pain and misery just for you